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Trainer
Number of posts : 392
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Registration date : 2008-06-16
|  Subject: Short Story  Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:23 pm | |
| Ive gotten a lot of PM Complaints from this story from {Insert username here} about this story...
My delete button has dissapeared so the best thing I can do is edit everything out >_<
Last edited by soccerryle on Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:46 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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G-dos
Moderator
Number of posts : 153
Age : 30
Location : Philadelphia, PA
Friend Code : Platinum: 2407 1315 6726
Name: Ken
Registration date : 2008-05-07
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Sat Aug 23, 2008 9:52 pm | |
| it's pretty good but somethings are missing out of an sentence maybe you should read over it and fill it in it sounds like true love i know how you fill i got in to something simaliar to this "story" but we broke up i didn't cry but i wanted to we didn't talk for like a week or so then she sen tme an messege saying something i am not willing to say on an pokemon site like she cried every night since we broke up and over things.but like i was saying good story i realy like it | |
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EG2121
Rookie
Number of posts : 119
Age : 28
Location : my home
Friend Code : Platinum:2536 2230 3175
Registration date : 2008-05-01
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Sun Aug 24, 2008 12:13 pm | |
| thats not short  | |
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null
Trainer
Number of posts : 392
Friend Code : n/a
Registration date : 2008-06-16
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:36 pm | |
| it's a lot shorter than Harry Potter -_- | |
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EG2121
Rookie
Number of posts : 119
Age : 28
Location : my home
Friend Code : Platinum:2536 2230 3175
Registration date : 2008-05-01
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:38 pm | |
| thats true i have 2 harry potter books and i have only read 1 or 2 pages | |
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Dirtshark91
Rookie
Number of posts : 141
Age : 31
Location : Nevada
Registration date : 2008-04-29
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:56 pm | |
| lol i have all the harry potter books man what a long frikin series | |
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pn
Elderly
Number of posts : 564
Age : 27
Location : California
Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000
Registration date : 2008-07-05
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:49 pm | |
| i have all the harry potter books too and i didnt even finish the 4th book lol | |
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pn
Elderly
Number of posts : 564
Age : 27
Location : California
Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000
Registration date : 2008-07-05
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:50 pm | |
| btw your short story isnt too bad | |
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Kassandra
Elderly
Number of posts : 501
Age : 28
Location : Canada, PE
Friend Code : Ask? =]
Registration date : 2008-06-11
| | Subject: Re: Short Story Sat Aug 30, 2008 3:06 pm | |
| whats with you and double posting pn? And I think thats a colorful story. | |
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