my first properly trained team (NOT FINISHED... LOL)

Infernape @ Focus Band
Moves: Stealth rock <- TM needed
Fire Blast
Close combat
Fake out

Kingdra @ Leftovers
Moves: Surf
Dragon pulse
Rain Dance
Waterfall

Mamoswine @ Expert belt
Moves: Earthquake
Ice Fang
Icebeam
Stone edge <- TM needed

Metagross @ Leftovers
Moves: Meteor mash
Earthquake <- TM needed
Fire Blast
Bullet punch

Lucario @ Expert belt
Moves: Close combat
Extremespeed
Swords Dance
Crunch

Zapdos @ Expert belt
Moves: Thunderbolt
Roost
Toxic
Thunder

Sorry for no EVs or natures because i dont know which ones to do.
(yes im a n00b when it comes to this)

Please help me with this.
Also i need a few TMs and Items aswell to help this team, so please post if you can give me some.

TMs needed: 1x Stone Edge
1x Earthquake
1x Stealth Rock


Thanks Guyz!

Dragonknight

Firstly, you should always contain the following in a RMT:
- Natures
- EVs
- Reason why you have a certain Pokemon
- Explain how your team works in general

Recommendations in Bold

dragonknight wrote:

Infernape @ Life orb
Moves: Stealth rock
Flamethrower
Close combat
Swords dance

This should be the standard lead ape, so change swords dance to Fake out and give it focus sash. Also, fire blast should replace flamethrower.

Kingdra @ Leftovers
Moves: Surf
Dragon pulse
Dragon dance
Icebeam

I see no point in dragon dance unless you want speed. If it's speed you want, might as well use Rain Dance, I hope you have swift swim as an ability. Otherwise fine, may want to consider a mixed attacker and replace dragon pulse with Waterfall and Ice beam with Draco Meteor (I think he learns it.. cant remember)

Mamoswine @ Expert belt
Moves: Earthquake
Toxic
Icebeam
Stone edge

Toxic is generally a poor choice on mamoswine, but if you can use it well then by all means keep it. however Ice beam MUST go, replace it with either Ice Shard or Ice fang. Ice shard is better so you can revenge kill salamence and dragonite.

Metagross @ Life orb
Moves: Meteor mash
Earthquake
Psychic
Bullet punch

If you really want a mixed metagross, use fireblast instead of psychic to beat steels.

Sorry i kinda gave up half way, theres just SO many wrong things with the team i couldnt be bothered, also the lack of information in your RMT made it EXTREMELY boring to rate. Anyway as a last note, replace eVire completely, hes useless since you dont have any pokeon weak to electric, eVire NEEDS the speed boost from motor drive.

Sorry if my comments were harsh, but seriously you should put more effort in this =P

haha thats fine boy some constructive criticism is what i need
Did you read the bottom?(probably not) it says that i dont know what EVs and natures that i should do and i was asking you to help me with that.
lol ohwell
thanks again

There is an EV training guide and Nature list on the "Pokemon Discussion" section.

Basically Natures Boost a stat by 10% while hindering another by 10%.
For example Adamant boosts Attack by 10% while lowering Special Attack by 10%, which is what mamoswine wants. (Assuming you take off Ice Beam)

ohhhh rite...
thanks boy

edit: ok boy i took out my evire and put in a zapdos with drill peck, thunda, roost and thunder wave. my kingdra now has rain dance and infernape now has fireblast but i still need those TMs that i posted up there.

Would've been nice to edit so its easier for me =P..

I wont go into natures and EVs since you dont know what they are.

Anyway, your Infernape still needs fake out to beat focus sash leads. Use Fakeout instead of swords dance

Waterfall on Kingdra for special walls, so you can attack from both sides, physical and special. Ice beam isnt much needed since you have dragon pulse, so water fall can go over that.

Mamoswines moveset should be Earthquake, Ice fang, Ice Shard and Stone Edge. Also let it hold a life orb to do more damage, since mamo doesnt get many super effectives.

Metagross should have explode over psychic. since he has such low spatk and psychic is poor coverage

Use crunch over dark pulse on lucario and swords dance over stone edge. And let it hold a life orb.

As for zapdos, use Thunderbolt Roost Toxic and Thunder i guess... Not many options for you since i doubt u have Hidden Powergrass/ice and Platinum version. Use Thunder only when there's rain.

Also, try not to let kingdra die too quickly, since it will open up a lot of weaknesses for you.

nah i dont have platinum.
My Lucario wont learn crunch unless its an egg move but i dont know how to egg tutor at all so i mite need someone to breed it for me.
The same for my infernape it doesnt learn fake out unless its egg tutored so i need someone to breed it for me.
I need an Explosion TM then for Metagross or should i just give it fire blast?
I'll make Mamoswine learn Ice Fang over Toxic and plus i also need a TM Toxic aswell... lol.

I'll update it for you... lol.

There isnt an Egg Tutor, so you'll have to rebreed them with egg moves, im pretty sure theres an Egg move guide in the Pokemon Discussion section. Also, for metagross, fireblast is only used on steel pokemon immune to earthquake such as levitating bronzong and skarmory, but since zapdos can handle both of them, just go with Explosion.

As for mamoswine, i really dont like ice beam there lol. Even bite is better for ghost types lol, so i would go Bite over ice beam if you really cant get ice shard over it.

As for egg moves its up to you whether you use them or not on infernape and lucario.

lol ok i really want a fakout now and a bite on mamoswine and a crunch on my lucario.
but i need to learn how to egg move em.

the female pokemon is the baby that will come out the egg
the male pokemon has the eggs moves it learns

so if you want fake out on infernape, get a female chimchar and a male makuhita that knows fake out.
the egg will hatch with a chimchar(the female pokemon) that knows fake out(from the male pokemon)

oh ok now i understand thanks ixion you seem to know alot.

edit: huh? i had a riolu and a growlithe in the day-care and the growlithe new crunch but they dont get along in the centre.
i know that these two can go together because i saw it on a site, unless they have false information.

Riolu DOES breed with Growlithe (according to serebii), are you sure ones male and the others female? lol.

Also if it says anything other than "They like to play with other Pokemon" or something like that, then they just need more time together.

oh ok yeah they are the right genders each (im not an idiot i wont mixed those up... lol) and yeah it does say that the like to play with other pokes, so i'll just let them get to know each other better... if u know wat i mean, lol.
thanks.

edit 1: k ive had them in the day-care for like two days now and they dont get along yet. WTF???

First and foremost, please, don't double or triple post. Simply edit your post or wait for a reply. Thanks. I have already edited a few double posts of yours in this topic already and I have just now fixed your triple post.

Secondly, there are a few people who give away TMs. Firstly there is Justin. When his wifi is working, he will give away 3 TMs at a time to anyone who posts in his topic (in pokemon trades) and meets him on the Chat Box when he is online. Failing that, come into the Chat Box when it is busy and simply ask for whatever TM(s) you are after.

lol sorry about the triple posting. I was told by justin that he lost his diamond and that he is closing his TM shop.