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Rialys Rookie
Number of posts : 59 Age : 31 Location : UK Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2009-04-17
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:40 pm | |
| 'these [clothes] are so yesterday' 'When did you buy them?' 'Yesterday'
It's quite funny watching me say that...
Anyway, good chapter! Keep it coming. ^_^ | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:24 pm | |
| SEASON 1 FINALY
Most neighbores only get out expenive china for special occasions; like someones graduation, a big dinner, your parents are comming over, or to throw at your husband. Patrica Noland is the headmistess of raysteria school. She has a major in english, and is talented in languages. She has a son who is slowly breaking away from her, and a divorced husband who lives in mexico.
Nurse: Mrs and Mr Spencer the doctor will see you know. Rialys: Its about time. Doctor: Ah Mrs and Mr Spencer how good to see you. Iam sure your here to see if your pregnate? Monkey: Yes Doctor: Well first things first we will need your sperm sample monkey, so if you will go to the bathroom with this cup. and i will get Mrs Spencer to the scan, Monkey takes the cup and walks into the bathroom* Doctor: Now rialys how long have you been pregnate. Rialys: Well we only did it yesterday. Doctor: Well than the scan wont pick up any signals, i gess you should take this pregance tests. Rialys: Well i was just woundering, this is our first time trying for a baby and well i dont know what to expect. Doctor: Oh Mrs Spencer theres nothing to fear..... Monkey makes a laud grunt and the Doctor and Rialys look at the bathroom door and monkey walks out* Monkey: What? i finished. Doctor: Ok i will go to the lab and get these tested. Erm you to can talk i gess. Monkey:So how was the scan? Rialys: He says its to early for a scan. Monkey: Oh thats a shame well i gess i could have seen it coming, Rialys: I hope we get this baby monkey i hope. Nurse: The Doctor will take a few ours will you like to wait or go out and be back in about 2-3 hours Monkey looks at Rialys and nods* Rialys: We wil wait, but can we get some magazines? Nurse: Of corse.
Bines*
kass and p sitting at a table*
Kass: So did you hear, that Rialys and Monkey went to the pregnacy doctor? Pn: Oh yea i hope it goes well. Kass: Yea. Pn: So hows your restaurant going. Kass: Its going ok, except ray doesn't like any of Christopher's ideas. Pn: Really? Kass: Yea he fainted when i told him we took a loan out. Pn: Well it does sound like him. Kass: But still he doesnt need to faint. Pn: Wheres Chris now? Kass: Hes looking for a flat he says he loves the location here and is thinking of moving here. Pn: Briliant. Kass: I know isn't it.
*knock knock knock*
Kass: Coming. Kass opens the door* :Hey all its little me back from paris Pn: No Get out i thought you were going all year. : Nope only for two months. Kass: Come in max
*Max is a male model photographer who hangs out with Rialys, Kass, and Pn hes the fourth member to the group.*
Kass: So Max how was the photo shoot Max: It went fabulous, my new spring colection i made will be dashing. Pn: Well why retourn early. Max: Well you see, my client said yes already and ended the tour early to start productions. Kass: Tea Max? Max: Yes please.
Few hours later.
Spencer*
Doctor: Well Mrs and Mr Spencecr i got the results back from the sperm test. Rialys: So Docter is it possible for me to have a baby? Doctor: No, iam sorry but the test came back and Monkey you are sterile. Monkey: No it cant be, may i see the test. Doctor: Here you go. It all there Rialys breaks down crying* Rialys: I really wanted a baby. Monkey: Its impossible there must be a mistake you sure this is my sample not someone elses you got by mistake? Doctor: I am sure.
Rialys runs out, monkey follows her*
Doctor: I hate to see this happen.
outside*
Rialys: I really want a baby. Monkey: I know, i know but theres nothing we can do, since....since... Monkey starts crying aswell*
Noland*
Pn: Well goodbye kass and great to see you again Max Kass: Bye Max: Cya sugar
Pn walks home in the dark*
Pn walks inside the house, and the light turns on*
mysterious voice: I have been expecting you. Pn: Whooo....whoo.. who are you? the chair turns around facing Pn revilling... Pn: Soccerryle? Is that you? Soccerryle: I want to see my son now Pn, Where is he. Pn: Your son? Your son? Erm i think you mean MY son. Soccerryle: Shut up. now where is he or I will... Pn: Do what.
Soccerryle slaps Pn and she falls to the floor*
Soccerryle: Now iam taking my son and your not running away from me like the last time. Pn spits on soccerryle and he slaps her again, Pn crawls to the kitchen when soccerryle turns round when a car drives by. PN grabs a knife and stabs Soccerryle, she then ...... PN: HELP SOMEONE. soccerryle: AHHHH. Pn then grpabes the phone and calls the police. Soccerryle: I will be back for my son.
soccerryle exsists on a limp*
Pn phones an emergence and the police arive.
Police: We found a smash window in the back do you have any idea who the culprite was? Pn: Yes my Ex-husbad soccerryle. Police: We will track him down to make sure he doesnt harm you again.
soccerryle*
socerryle: Ah you arived unknown man: So did your way work Soccerryle: No i got stabbed UM: Are you ok? Soccerryle: i wiill be fine, i gess its time for plan B UM:Ok so painfull or quick and easy. Soccerryle: I Want her to suffer. | |
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Mercury Moderator
Number of posts : 552 Age : 28 Location : England Friend Code : Platinum FC-1548 5398 5890
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:27 pm | |
| Oh noez I'ma be stolen >.< | |
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Rialys Rookie
Number of posts : 59 Age : 31 Location : UK Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2009-04-17
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:29 pm | |
| Lol, poor Merc! You have an evil Soccer for your dad... o.O Now that's disturbing. I hope Pn survives whatever this twisted version of Soccer and his accomplice have in store for her. | |
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Boy Trainer
Number of posts : 498 Age : 34 Location : Behind you, with a knife and magikarps for sale. Friend Code : Diamond: 1891 3086 3833
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Soul Silver: 2665 3592 3834 Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:34 pm | |
| llol nice story, although it's a bit hard to follow at times. Keep it up =d | |
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Chris Admin
Number of posts : 705 Location : TRNC Friend Code : 1118 8172 5961 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:35 pm | |
| Awesome finale Chrono! Will you be making the next season soon?? | |
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Kassandra Elderly
Number of posts : 501 Age : 28 Location : Canada, PE Friend Code : Ask? =] Registration date : 2008-06-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:40 pm | |
| Lol, I love this, Chrono!! My only concern is that Max's Char. seems gay.... :p Keep it coming, I'd love to hear more!
Kass | |
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null Trainer
Number of posts : 392 Friend Code : n/a Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 2:59 pm | |
| Merc, get in the effin' car already, you're gonna be a MEXICAN! XD
I want her to suffer? Hmm.. Doesn't sound like me, but it does sound like an UBER-AWESOME SEASON FINALE!!
*Hopes for Season 2 SOON* | |
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Monkey Rookie
Number of posts : 68 Age : 33 Location : Studying in my tree or battling in my dojo. Friend Code : 0860 0607 3177 Registration date : 2008-04-13
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 8:24 pm | |
| "Doctor: No, iam sorry but the test came back and Monkey you are sterile." NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOi'm sorry baby...hopefully we can still have our child *cries with Rialys* serious note-great story, better than my suggestions, no mre 3 way with Kass and pn(at least not story wise, ladies jk), keep it up Monkey | |
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pn Elderly
Number of posts : 564 Age : 27 Location : California Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 8:59 pm | |
| - Xemnas wrote:
- Merc, get in the effin' car already, you're gonna be a MEXICAN! XD
I want her to suffer? Hmm.. Doesn't sound like me, but it does sound like an UBER-AWESOME SEASON FINALE!!
*Hopes for Season 2 SOON* You're just saying that because you really do want me to suffer >.> | |
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Sasuke Gym Leader
Number of posts : 232 Age : 27 Location : Australia Friend Code : 3996 5799 4419 Registration date : 2009-01-07
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:04 pm | |
| Poor pn but she owned him lol! RUN MERC RUN! | |
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pn Elderly
Number of posts : 564 Age : 27 Location : California Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:07 pm | |
| I know I did =D Poor Merc..Don't let that nasty person take you away. | |
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:13 am | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:44 am | |
| Season 2 coming soon............ | |
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pn Elderly
Number of posts : 564 Age : 27 Location : California Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:51 pm | |
| Let the stabbing begin. You know, I take tae kwon do/karate so I can defend myself. | |
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Sasuke Gym Leader
Number of posts : 232 Age : 27 Location : Australia Friend Code : 3996 5799 4419 Registration date : 2009-01-07
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jun 14, 2009 11:01 pm | |
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pn Elderly
Number of posts : 564 Age : 27 Location : California Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jun 15, 2009 7:22 pm | |
| Yes, I do. I broke two pieces of wood with my fist in one shot . Anyways, hurry up CHrono with the story. | |
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Monkey Rookie
Number of posts : 68 Age : 33 Location : Studying in my tree or battling in my dojo. Friend Code : 0860 0607 3177 Registration date : 2008-04-13
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:34 pm | |
| NO! season 2 is gonna suck...no baby for me...no affairs...i hate my charectar...
Monkey | |
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ixion124 Moderator
Number of posts : 656 Location : California Badges : Friend Code : 1160 9739 5678 Registration date : 2008-04-15
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jun 15, 2009 9:15 pm | |
| haha max takes pics of guys | |
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pn Elderly
Number of posts : 564 Age : 27 Location : California Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:16 pm | |
| It said Max is a male photographer which means he is a photographer who is a guy. I think. Lol Monkey. | |
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Chris Admin
Number of posts : 705 Location : TRNC Friend Code : 1118 8172 5961 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:34 pm | |
| - Prof. Monkey wrote:
- NO!
season 2 is gonna suck...no baby for me...no affairs...i hate my charectar...
Monkey Don't complain! At least you're still in the story! Season 2 is going to be awesome - I can't wait! For all those wondering, Chrono mentioned something about this Saturday for the first chapter of the next season. | |
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ixion124 Moderator
Number of posts : 656 Location : California Badges : Friend Code : 1160 9739 5678 Registration date : 2008-04-15
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Tue Jun 16, 2009 9:32 am | |
| no
*Max is a male model photographer who hangs out with Rialys, Kass, and Pn hes the fourth member to the group.*
so he takes pics of male models lol | |
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pn Elderly
Number of posts : 564 Age : 27 Location : California Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-07-05
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Tue Jun 16, 2009 3:54 pm | |
| Oh. I didn't see the model part. Lol. I feel honored to hang out with Max xDD | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:16 pm | |
| THE LONG ANTICIPATED SEASON 2 IS HERE AND ITS NOW.
shall we re-cap?
rialys wants a baby but monkey is sterril so they cant have a baby and rialys is angry and monkey is upset.
Pn is scared that soccerryle may hurt her and take mercury away from her.
soccerryle has a plan with his asosiet.
kass is opening a restourant with a contactor who is waisting her money
ray is upset because he doesnt like the contactor and thinks he is loosing kass
chris the contractor is moving to raysteria lain.
Max the male photographer is back from paris.
Rialys is going to try and get pn a job with a famous magazine.
Season 2-episode 1
People don't realize how important children are, or how easy children have it. They play, do a little work, eat,poop,sleep, have fun, and bring joy to parents hearts, when they succeed and show love and kindness. Some people know this feeling like Patrica Noland and Kassandra Bines two ladies who live in raysteria lain, they both have children who are loving and kind. Unfortunately Rialys Spencer cant have a baby due to Monkey Spencer her husband being sterile, she would look out at of the window and see all the smiling children and she would wish she could have one......
Spencer*
*Rialys is looking out of the window and monkey walks in* Monkey: Sooner or later the parent will think your a pedo Rialys: Hu? Did you say something sterile? Monkey: Oh i see. Rialys: Oh Monkey iam sorry, did you say something?*looking at monkey now* Monkey: I said the parent will think your a pedo. Rialys: Iam sorry i cant help it, i want a child so badly. Monkey: Iam sorry iam not help with the child problem. Rialys: Ha your right. Monkey when I Was looking out of the window i saw our laws is a bit how do you say unkept i was thinking we should get a gardener. Monkey:Yes your right you should call. Well i will be off Ray and I are going to go golfing so i will be going. Rialys: Ok, bye *monkey exits and Rialys gets the phone*
Bines*
*kass is sitting at the kitchen table holding a paper she reads it and she gets a mad look on her face* Kass: BOY!!!!!!!!! *boy comes down stairs* Boy: Yes? Kass: How do you explain this? Boy: Oh that i see yes well.... Kass: A -4 in history! In history? Boy: Whats the big deal its history. Kass: -4 isnt good enough boy acctually is worse then bad its utterly terrible i dont know anyone in my life to get bellow 0. HOW DID YOU GET BELOW 0? Boy: She took a point off for each time someone talked Kass: so you talked 4 times and got a terrible score. YOU ARE GROUNDED and more then that your going to summer school for this. Boy: Thats not fair! Kass: Not fair? Not fair? I will tell you whats not fair spending money for a privet school to give good education so you have a future and you get a -4. And meanwhile iam working to change my bakery into a restourant to get more money to pay for you. Boy: Sorry. Kass: SORRY AINT GOOD ENOUGH. now go to your room.....
Noland*
*Pn is sitting at a police officers desk*
Police Chef: So Mrs... Pn: Miss Police Chef; Sorry Miss, let me change that then. Miss Patrica Noland what might i help you for? Pn: Well the Police man said to come to you for a 24 hour watch PC: Why may i ask? pn: My loonatic husband tired to take my child. PC: Oh so you are married. Pn: Yes, i mean no, we broke up but he moved to spain befor we got the divorce and he sent money every month, for mercury and he came back 2 days ago and attacked me. PC: Iam sorry but if your still married i cant help you its his right. good day Miss Noland. Pn: but.... PC: I said...Good day. | |
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Mercury Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:21 pm | |
| Oh dear I'ma definitely be stolen D= | |
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