RMT rate my team

not done with the training and moveset yet...
i will write down the nature and stuff later...
pupitar - earthquake, crunch, dark pulse, and rock throw (gonna change rock throw and dark pulse later for stone edge and dark pulse)
crawdaunt - avalanche, swords dance, crabhammer, and night slash
shiftry - explosion, extrasensory, synthesis, and nature power (i just evolved it...moveset will be different later on...i need a strong grass type move for shiftry to replace synthesis)
houndoom - thunder fang, faint attack, flamethrower and howl
honchkrow - steel wing, fly, night slash, and substitute
umbreon - toxic, baton pass, quick attack, and dark pulse (need to get rid of quick attack and replace for mean look)
dont post anything rude please...chris helped me with my moveset so it shouldnt be bad at all
im sorry if i forgot to post something...

Man and I was looking forward to being rude.jk {sarcasm}

I like your team It seems well thought out and the mix between dark/ types seems to be coming along nicely!!

thanks...chris helped me with it

Are you going to EV train? if not, i'll just post my recomended movesets.

pupitar - earthquake, crunch, dark pulse, and rock throw (gonna change rock throw and dark pulse later for stone edge and )
Assuming this is your lead and you WILL evolve it into tyranitar, i would use:
~ Crunch
~ Stone Edge
~ Earthquake
~ Dragon Dance
Note that dragon dance is an egg move, so if you want that you'll have to breed a new one. If you can't be bothered, replace it with Ice Beam for dragons or Thunderbolt for waters. Adamant Nature if you use dragon dance, or Quiet nature for the ice beam or thunderbolt is recommended.

crawdaunt - avalanche, swords dance, crabhammer, and night slash
If you use swords dance, use waterfall instead since it cannot miss. I would get Aerial Ace over avalanche simply because it is super effective against fighting and bugs (they are good against dark types).

nuzleaf (just evolved) - explosion, sunny day, synthesis, and nature power (i just evolved it...moveset will be totally different later on)
Evolve it to shiftry, rest seems fine.. i think.. know nothing about shiftry lol

houndoom - fire fang, faint attack, pursuit or bite (forgot which one...think it was pursuit) and howl (gonna replace the pursuit/bite for thunder fang)
Use special attacks, his special attack is base 20 higher.
i suggest
~ Fire Blast
~ Dark Pulse
~ Nasty Plot
~ Pursuit

honchkrow - night slash, fly, night shade, and pursuit (need to get the TMs steel wing and substitute for honchkrow)
Fly is one of the worst possible moves in my opinion.
Night Shade is also a not so great move.
I suggest Drill Peck over fly and maybe... Steel wing over night shade.
Also sucker punch is a nice move which you should consider over pursuit/nightslash.

umbreon - toxic, baton pass, quick attack, and dark pulse (need to get rid of quick attack and replace for mean look)
Dark pulse is bad on umbreon, payback is nicer, or wish, which is even better.

dark pulse is perfectly fine on umbreon....the thing is im not done with my training yet

watch out for tyranitar
its sand stream could have bad effects on your other pokemon

also
you should add a weavile if you want
its a great sweeper

i was planning on having a weavile but then again, i dont have a razor claw whatsoever...if i can get a razor claw i will just raise a weavile as a backup pokemon

it ok team

darkfighter wrote:

dark pulse is perfectly fine on umbreon....the thing is im not done with my training yet

I don't see why you would prefer dark pulse when Umbreon is slow, prevent you from getting flinch most of the time since you're slower than most opponents, also Payback, althought not as strong with 50 base power, but with umbreons slow speed theres a change that u will go 2nd and get hit, allowing paybacks base power to be 100. Also, umbreons attack stat is a little higher than spatk stat.

maybe she EV trained it in speed! lol