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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: reshirams love interest! Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:02 pm | |
| in the pokemon world love is in the air! for reshi that is! with who you might ask? WELL READ AND FIND OUT! keldeo:ummm reshi why you drooling? reshiram:i wasent drooling keldeo:wait a second.....YOUVE GOT A CRUSH ON SOMEONE! reshiram:no i dont! why would I!? im genderless anyways! keldeo:sure you are reshi sure you are..... blaziken:whats the problom? keldeo:reshi's got a crush reshiram:no i dont! blaziken:O_o ummm ima just walk away now real slow like *walks away* keldeo:akward...so who do you have a crush on? reshiram:I DONT HAVE A CRUSH ON ANYONE!!! keldeo:sure you dont..... *walks away* reshiram:gezz i was just drooling and now he thinks i have a crush on someone! latias:hi reshi! reshiram:oh! umm hi latias!...how are you doing today? latias:i was on my way back from the market reshiram:oh i see......well you look nice today latias:thanks ill see you later reshi byes! *leaves* reshiram:bye! *goes in his house* keldeo:so its latias isnt it!? reshiram:HOW DID YOU GET IN HERE!? keldeo:we're roommates remember? reshiram:oh yea.....wasent zekrom living with us? keldeo:he left remember? reshiram:oh yea...now mew lives with us mew:you have a crush on latias? reshiram:NO I DONT! keldeo:dude when i saw you drooling you were looking at latias reshiram mew: keldeo:i knew it!! reshiram:can you guys PLEASE keep it secret! PLEASE!? mew:oh relax we wont tell keldeo:unless $$$$$$$ is involved mew:*psybeams keldeo* keldeo:OWWWW ok i get your point! reshiram:im doomed..... mew:you wont be doomed ill keep watch on keldeo keldeo:HEY thats stalking and plus it wont matter once you ask latias out reshiram:....*faints* mew:yep hes doomed keldeo:big time | |
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Miforcln Noob
Number of posts : 14 Age : 30 Location : Masschusetts Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-03-27
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:05 pm | |
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Ito le Typhlito Admin
Number of posts : 1901 Age : 31 Location : MA, USA Ribbons : Fire/Grass E4
Friend Code : SoulSilver
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| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:08 pm | |
| lolol told you your a boy xD | |
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Prof West Head Professor
Number of posts : 600 Age : 28 Location : London Friend Code : Black: 5157 2125 1931
3DS: 1306-5572-5528 Registration date : 2010-03-26
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Wed Apr 04, 2012 8:27 am | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:24 pm | |
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Straticus Pokemon Lover
Number of posts : 253 Age : 28 Location : IL Badges : Friend Code : 1204 5955 5446 Registration date : 2008-04-09
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:23 pm | |
| I'll make this blunt.
What the hell is the assumption here?
Keldeo sees Reshiram drooling and the first thing that comes to mind is love?
He couldve been thinking about something to eat in substitute for eating for christ sakes.
Seems cliche..but...w/e...fix it up if you can. | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Wed Apr 04, 2012 6:29 pm | |
| ok clearly you didnt read the whole thing keldeo knew reshi was stearing at latias so there NOW BE PAITIANT FOR THE NEXT PART | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:12 pm | |
| PART 2!!! keldeo:is he waking up? mew:yep reshiram:huh? what happened? mew:after keldeo suggested asking out latias you fainted keldeo:yup thats it in a nutshell reshiram:so i have to ask her out.......man im doomed! mew:wheres your confidence!? reshiram:well you've never been in love with someone mew:true....but still! reshiram:might as well *later that day* reshiram:ok reshi you can do this your a dragon shes a dragon you look good she looks good keldeo:you are seriously over thinking this reshiram:*sigh* im just worried she'll say no and never like me....... keldeo:dude it will be fine and if she does i have the sad face comforting ice cream ready reshiram:ok then *breathes* you can do this reshi *walks outside* umm hey latias! latias:hhhmmm? of hey reshi! reshiram:listen i wanted to ask you something....... latias:yeessss? reshiram:do you......want to go out with me?? latias: sure! reshiram: ill pick you up around 7:00 ok? latias:alright see you tonight! reshiram:*walks in* ....... keldeo:ssssoooo? mew:what happened!? reshiram:SHE SAID YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHHHHHOOOOOOO!!! keldeo:was that so hard? reshiram:actualy that was proboly the hardest thing ive ever done! mew:wow your lucky reshi! reshiram:if you'll excuse me ima do the happy dance! keldeo:wow......... mew:hey look at the bright side latias said yes! what will happen next! is reshi gonna get kissed!? or is he and latias in for a extreme suprise!? find out in the next part! | |
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dialga3021 Pokemon Lover
Number of posts : 197 Age : 25 Friend Code : 3782 3834 4342 Registration date : 2010-12-22
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 5:18 am | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 8:13 am | |
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Ito le Typhlito Admin
Number of posts : 1901 Age : 31 Location : MA, USA Ribbons : Fire/Grass E4
Friend Code : SoulSilver
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| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:42 am | |
| wait till latios finds out lol | |
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Prof West Head Professor
Number of posts : 600 Age : 28 Location : London Friend Code : Black: 5157 2125 1931
3DS: 1306-5572-5528 Registration date : 2010-03-26
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:04 am | |
| I think someone else should do the story from Latias's point of view with her own set of friends and such. It could be cool. | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:06 pm | |
| PART 3! reshiram:ok enough dancing its time for my date!! *after picking up latias they head for.....* latias:wait where are we going exactly? reshiram:see once i had this cottage near this old lake but dont worry the cottage aint the true destination.......you look great by the way latias: thanks.....so do you reshiram: thanks....and we're here!! latias:wow......its beautiful...you had a house here? reshiram:yea i used it for the summer months but i needed more space latias:the way the stars reflect off the water is so amazing.....its so beautiful reshiram:not as beautiful as you latias latias:i think i'm.....i'm reshiram:dont say a word.......i know..... latias:*gasp* reshiram:*kisses latias* latias: reshiram:sorry if that...i love you.....so much latias:me too....man i hope latios dosent get mad... reshiram:actually....i already told him about this.....but dont worry hes cool with it latias:thats great!.....ill be honest i really didnt see that kiss coming....... reshiram:*sigh* mew keldeo come on out i knew you were there the whole time..... mew:IT WAS HIS IDEA! keldeo:dont lie you wanted to know how it would go mew:yes but i didnt want it to be like this! latias: -_- how do you live with them? reshiram:patience plus its keldeo you have to watch out for... keldeo:I CAN HEAR YOU!!! reshiram:i know that..... latias:you do have interesting friends reshiram:yea....but with you around its much more tollerable latias:oh stop your gonna make me blush! reshiram: keldeo:hey reshi your drooling agian! latias:oh stop already besides he looks cute when he drools mew:they were made for each other keldeo:ill be honest they totaly were...... reshiram:i love you so much latias latias:i do to mew:for the love of arceus someone get me a barf bag! | |
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Light Rookie
Number of posts : 94 Age : 27 Location : ??? Friend Code : ??? Registration date : 2011-01-01
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:15 pm | |
| haha this is getting better. Maybe you should extend it a bit each time. Add another Point of view maybe. But otherwise this is good. | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:50 pm | |
| you'll be suprised what i have instore | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:49 pm | |
| PART 4!!! mew:ok went to the store and got barf bags keldeo:thats good.... reshiram:hey latias sence you are moving in.....you dont have a diary do you? latias:no why? reshiram:mew gets VERY curious.... mew:im like a purrlion ok! latias:easy now we all have curiosity inside keldeo:i never though there would be an actuall voice of reason in this house mew:get used to it reshiram:not only that plus said voice has an amazing personality to match latias: man you are bent on seeing me blush aren't you? reshiram:maybe so maybe no mew:*barfs in barf bag* keldeo:save a lot of those otherwise were gonna have barf everywhere reshiram:i could keep going if you want...... latias:umm hey reshi can i talk to you privatly for a moment? reshiram:sure *reshi and latias go outside* latias:i wanted to talk to you about this privatly.....you know latios right? reshiram:of corse why? latias:well.... hes gone missing reshiram:what!!! why didn't you tell me earlyer! latias:i didnt want your friends involved.... reshiram:you do know me and my friends are an exploration team right? (NOTE TO THE READERS:these events are events i have made up during the timeline of the mystery dungeon series) latias:wow......i can be so dense..... reshiram:we all have flaws yet your still beautiful... latias: well for starters you finally made me blush but this ISNT the time for that! reshiram:right! *walks inside* keldeo grab the treasure bag! we finally have a mission! mew:saving latios right? latias:you had the window open didnt you.... mew:sorry but agian im like a purrlion keldeo:just dont die like one..... mew:i take your meaning reshiram:NOT THE TIME FOR THIS! keldeo and mew:good point! why is latios missing? why hasent the soul dew been mentioned at all yet!? and was latios captured? some of these questions and more will be answered in paart 5! | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:25 pm | |
| PART 5!!!!!
latias:this was where i last saw latios
keldeo: question? WHY WHERE YOU NEAR A MOUNTIAN!!!
latias:this places looks amazing during the day
reshiram:so....search the mountian cave system?
mew:thats usually the point
keldeo:reshiram look at this! its some kind of sword! its got this weird ingraving on it...
reshiram:*takes from keldeo* ok thats it now we MUST search this place!
mew:whats with you all of a sudden?
reshiram:this is my best friends sword.......
latias:whos your best friend?
reshiram:if im correct hes in here and must be hurt...he doesnt lose this easily
latias:well latios might be in there so lets go!!!
*latias and reshiram rush inside*
mew:i sence a flashback
keldeo:your not the only one
*both go in*
reshiram:weird this imprint is in a jewel shape and theres four doors
latias:each door has a shard of the crystal *points to the floor* see here? the lines will fall downword and make a stair case ascending deeper into the mountian
mew:whoa you know a lot
latias:when you play so many legend of zelda games.....
keldeo:focus ladys!
mew&latias:right
reshiram:ok then....ill take far left keldeo take the far right latias take the right mew take left
mew,keldeo & latias:right!
reshiram:ok then....this is an obvious trap....*steps over trip wire* hehehe easy as poffins *steps on pressure plate* well thats clever! *water starts flooding in* oh dump!! *starts flying* must grab crystal!!! *flys to it* gotcha!!! *grabs it and the water starts draining* phew that was close... *walks back
keldeo:ok lets see here.....a picture puzzle? hmmm somethings wrong.....ill find out later *shifts around peices* well it makes the picture of mewtwo now for the tail!......which is missing *Looks to the end of the room* ohhhhh hmmm *walks back to doorway then turns around and starts running* must grab peice.....*spikes come up as hes running* knew that would happen!!! *grabs last peice then turns around* i gotta time this just right...........*jumps over spike wave and runs agian* thanks arceus for my great speed stat!!!! *inserts peice and grabs shard* aww yes!
latias:hmmm *takes out mist spray and sprays it* wow lazers in a mountian......whats next? a underground lab? *moves around lazers and takes shard* i knew reshi didnt know but *wall opens up* what the.....*flames shoot out* holy crap!!! *flys at mach 2* i love my speed hi guys!
keldeo:so we're waiting for mew now?
reshiram:old friend i hope your allright
mew:reshiram? are you still worried about your friend?
reshiram:he never losses his weapon......
keldeo:relax we'll find him
mew:ok back!
reshiram:what took you?
mew:notice i dont have a tail anymore?
latias:i was wondering why you looked so in pain ok everyone insert the gem shards!
*everyone inserts the shards and the stair case opens, everyone walks downstairs and sees....*
reshiram:DEAR ARCEUS ITS YOU!!!!
???:hello.....*cough* old friend.......
who is reshirams best friend? where is latios? why ha the soul dew STILL not been mentioned yet? some of these questions and more coming up soon!!!! in part 6!!!!! | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:02 am | |
| Lol we know the ? Is arceus lol not bad though | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:42 am | |
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Poke Master Amr Pokemon Lover
Number of posts : 200 Age : 24 Friend Code : 2493 8427 1269 Registration date : 2011-08-09
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Sun Aug 26, 2012 1:28 am | |
| Nice storys reshiram and daeth the ? can be anyone, maybe latios even. But a, its probably someone who needs or can at least hold the sword and b. The expression DEAR ARCEUS IT'S YOU. Is equated to DEAR GOD ITS YOU | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:08 am | |
| note:i do plan on picking the story back up just give me time. | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:01 pm | |
| PART 6!!!! (srry for the wait)
Reshiram:well this explains the sword but really i never though you would be here samurott!
Keldeo:are we flashbacking now or later?
Samurott:dont let me speak why dont you? allow me to explain *grunt*
Latias: dont move to much you'll take longer to heal
Samurott:it was a year ago about the same time as 2 legendary warriors repaired time. my troop and I we're leading an exploration party thats when i first met Kyurem....and his anger i soon met reshiram after as he explained Kyurems blight as he was tending to my wounds i already knew the fate of my troop as we left the cave reshiram came as part of my proof.
Reshiram:sence everyone would have called him crazy we then worked on restoring Kyurems peaceful side which actually worked well i then left Samurott and went here to Hoenn and keldeo and mew can tell you the rest if you want
Latias:well sence we went through a large portion of backflashing did you see my brother in here?
Samurott: latios? *starts geting up* thats why im here.....actually it was to visit reshiram but then i heard you and your boyfriend there chatting and decided to look into it.
Reshiram:is there no privacy?
Mew:nope now come on we have a mountian to climb!
Samurott:he....she.....its right! we have to move
Latias:take it slow you hard head.
Reshiram:i spent a month with the guy and learned he dosent know what that means
Samurott:indeed i do not! *holds up swords* now lets go forth!
*meanwhile*
Latios:......ugh... my head..
???:wake up weakling its time to talk
Latios:wha?....hey who the heck are you? wheres sis!?
???:shes coming right into my hands along with all her friends
Latios:if this is about the soul dew...
???:i have little time for such a pathetic gem...i want to know where Arceus's beacon is....
Latios:and you think i know?
???:you do but you dont....
Latios:and that means?
???:its within your mind just like you sisters. soon the power of a god shall be mine!!
whats going on? who has Latios captive and does this change everything? find out.....at some point!!
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IgnoranceHater Noob
Number of posts : 5 Friend Code : Yomommalol Registration date : 2012-08-27
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:45 pm | |
| I need to make this quick, I'm dying inside at a dangerous rate just BEING HERE. Where do I start....Grammar. If you are going to attempt to 'write' something, you need to use good grammar. This looks like a chat room quote, or a poem. It's clearly neither.
Next, plot. Oh my mistake, I forgot there is no plot here.
Now on to....everything else. IT'S SO CORNY I'M DYING INSIDE. If you are gonna write a love story PLEASE do it write. Having pokemon for the main characters makes it seem like a book for five year olds, written by a ten year old. And it is absolutely the most embarrassingly cheesy thing I have ever read. It's just redundant. It's like something you would read or watch in the early 1900's. The most simple of plot and dialogue. There's nothing interesting about it, it's so basic. It is in no way unique. The best line in this may possibly be "I am genderless". Sadly, the rest of it does not live up to the standards of that quote. Even if it did, it would still be horrible.
Maybe you should stop writing before you kill someone. GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR. | |
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Reshiram Elderly
Number of posts : 663 Age : 25 Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2012-02-17
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:18 pm | |
| dear crap i write something for the LOL's and you make it so....litteral. | |
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IgnoranceHater Noob
Number of posts : 5 Friend Code : Yomommalol Registration date : 2012-08-27
| Subject: Re: reshirams love interest! Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:05 pm | |
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