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ixion124 Moderator
Number of posts : 656 Location : California Badges : Friend Code : 1160 9739 5678 Registration date : 2008-04-15
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:55 pm | |
| adriana got married, so sad but shes still a great model | |
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Chris Admin
Number of posts : 705 Location : TRNC Friend Code : 1118 8172 5961 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Jul 05, 2009 12:15 pm | |
| Chrono, how's the next chapter coming along?? I'm curious as to what happens next! XD | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:56 pm | |
| - Chris wrote:
- Chrono, how's the next chapter coming along?? I'm curious as to what happens next! XD
mee too oh BTW i dont know what the next guide was supposed to beee? |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:24 am | |
| Diseption, its human nature to decive, everyone is cheated on by someone in there life, if its your friend who says they cant go to see a movie, and goes see a movie with other friends.
Rialys Spencer is no exception, she was a desperate fool looking for a baby.
Rialys and Kass at the mall
Rialys: Maybe I can steal a baby. kass: Why dont you just adopt. Rialys: I would but adopted children always have problems. Kass: you sure? Rialys: Possitive, I like the stealing idea. Kass: yea if you want to go to jail for stealing and pedophilia. Rialys: Uncalled for. Kass: Sorry its just Ray and Chris are putting my under so much pressure. Rialys: Why whats happening? Kass: Ray wants to do everything cheaply but Chris wants to spare no expene and ern everything back, i dont know who to go for. Rialys: Which ever gets you the most money, love comes second, money first remember that. Kass: So chris? Rialys: Iam not saying anything. Kass: So do you really know who Adriana Lima is? Rialys; Dont know and dont care. Kass; So you lied to Max? Rialys: i was desperate. Kass: Howcome? Rialys: Gab was asking about children, and it kinda came onto the subject that me and monkey had a child... Kass: Haha Rialys: This is not a laughing matter now he keeps asking for a play date for his eldest son who is around your son's age so maybe..... Kass: No. Rialys: You dont even know what i was going to ask. Kass: You were going to ask if you could borrow Boy and pretend hes your son. Rialys: hmmm no ha, what gave you that idea, i was going to ask if we could borrow sasuke.... Kass; No, so when ever your family has a get together my son has to come with you. Rialys: Just this once... Kass; No just tell him the truth. Rialys: The truth brings pain and suffering to my sole.....PLEASE (some people in the shop turn to look) Iam begging you please...... Kass: Get up Rialys your embarricing me.. Rialys: All i wanted is a baby...hey i got an idea...cya later Kass....kissess. Kass: *Confused voice* bye?
Spencer*
Rialys is on the phone....
Rialys: Yes so you can come down from mexico in two days? Voice: Yes. Rialys: Cya then and remember your brother cant know.... Monkey enters Monkey: Hey babes who was that. Rialys: Oh just PN telling about how annoyed she is about this police man.. Monkey: Sounds like a problem. Rialys: well you know pn.
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sorry its a little short didn't have time to finish hope to continue soon....also enjoy my other story "Darkbrotherhood" where strange events happen...... | |
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Mercury Moderator
Number of posts : 552 Age : 28 Location : England Friend Code : Platinum FC-1548 5398 5890
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:41 am | |
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null Trainer
Number of posts : 392 Friend Code : n/a Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:51 am | |
| Wonder who's the voice.. :O | |
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Rialys Rookie
Number of posts : 59 Age : 31 Location : UK Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2009-04-17
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:11 pm | |
| -.- So now I'm gonna steal Merc? Geez! Well, if Mexico=Soccer, then...meh, I've become one of the bad guys! | |
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Mercury Moderator
Number of posts : 552 Age : 28 Location : England Friend Code : Platinum FC-1548 5398 5890
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:42 pm | |
| Goddarnit. Didn't think of that -.- | |
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Chris Admin
Number of posts : 705 Location : TRNC Friend Code : 1118 8172 5961 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:33 pm | |
| Chrono, sorry about the delay in posting this but I just read it! XD
Awesome chapter! Bring on the next one! I wonder what'll happen next... | |
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null Trainer
Number of posts : 392 Friend Code : n/a Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sat Jul 18, 2009 10:29 pm | |
| Ehe. Rialys is my Partner In Crime XD.
I have an assumption. Rialys was the person who I went to after pn stabbed me? I'm the one on the phone??
Anyway, we'll find out soon =D | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:23 am | |
| *continued*
noldand*
Kass and Pn are sitting at the table in Pns house.
Kass: God tht Rialys sure has issues with children. Pn: What do you mean? Kass: She told me she wanted to steal someones child. Pn: You sure? You sure she didnt want to steal your child. Kass: Acctually she wanted your child. Pn: So yours? Kass: What? Pn: Never mind. Kass: Anyways so did you hear any new from Soccerryle? and what does he look like now? Pn: nothing and fat. Kass: Serously. all mexicans are thin as sticks. Pn: well i dont know i didnt really look, since i was being killed. Kass: Being killed? But your still here, arent you? Pn: Yes iam still here, now dont be so silly.
2 days later, in a dark street rialys and a shadowy figure are talking*
Riayls: Its about time you got here. Shadowy figure: It was a long flight. Rialys: So heres the adress i will try to keep them away. Shadowy figure; What ever you say, what time should we meet then? Rialys: I will call you to tell you i got all of them away so we can work quietly. Shadowy Figure: And your sure they wont mind. Rialys: As long as we stick to the plan i can get a child. Now i will be taking my leave, this street is giving me the creeps, also go around the back so the neigbours can see you. Shadowy figure: will do good bye. | |
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:38 am | |
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null Trainer
Number of posts : 392 Friend Code : n/a Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:53 am | |
| - Skywarp wrote:
Kass: Anyways so did you hear any new from Soccerryle? and what does he look like now? Pn: nothing and fat. Kass: Serously. all mexicans are thin as sticks.
Pwnt. Not as good as some of your others, but it was a good chapter. | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:24 am | |
| oh dude i didn;t know what to say,,i am sorry for the affence... | |
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Rialys Rookie
Number of posts : 59 Age : 31 Location : UK Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2009-04-17
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:34 pm | |
| Oh boy, I'm really the main antagonist here aren't I? lol, it's funny to see me being interpreted as some evil child-stealing alien... | |
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Chris Admin
Number of posts : 705 Location : TRNC Friend Code : 1118 8172 5961 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:21 pm | |
| Haha! Rialys is now one of the bad guys... I wonder if/when she will actually steal a child...
Chrono, a bit shorter than other chapters but it was still good. Though, I do prefer previous chapters to your latest one. Still, keep the story going and be sure to update soon so that we all find out what happens next! | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:50 pm | |
| well its not another chapter its a continueation from the chapter befor it hence the continue. since i didnt have time to finish the other chapter i did it now. | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:18 am | |
| Trust, trust is important in any relationship, without trust a relationship can crash and burn.....
Spencer*
Rialys: Monkey you should go see a movie tonight maybe take hmmm kass and Pn? Monkey:You kicking me out? Rialys: Hmmm hahahaha (over dramatic fake laughing) heavens no, why would i do that. You should go out with the boys if you want and take Kass and Pn Monkey: Why does Kass and Pn have to come? Rialys: Because, they need a break. Monkey: And you not coming because? Rialys: Because...Iam... Monkey:Your? Rialys: Because iam going through my lady time ok, and i dont want anyone to bother me. Monkey: Geese calm down. fine i will take everyone away. Rialys: Thank you.
Bines*
Ray: Wow, were not putting in a disco ball, Kass: Why are you like that Chris says white you say black, why? Ray: Because its our restaurant and I thought it would be diffrent. Chris: Well, if we dont have a disco ball the down stairs will not be do "groovy ". Kass: Groovy? Chris: Yes that is what the kids are saying right, iam trying to stay diggy with it dog. Ray: Still like this guy? Kass: Hes funny, Ray: Fine i give up, you guys can design it and i will go, do some guy stuff, you down wit that? Kass: Wow i swear it turned all 70s all up in here. Chris: Well you do that, yet least me and kass can get down to some real buisness. Ray: Fine chris: Fine. (telephone rings) Kass: Ill be right back. (answers the phone) Yellow.... Rialys: Hey, babes, Kass: Oh hi Rialys how are you? Rialys: Iam good, iam good, are you free tonight? Kass: Hold on....Ray are we free tonight? Ray: I belive so. Kass: Yea i am. Rialys: Good, ok so you wnt to go out tonight. Kss: Ray you want to go out tonight? Ray: Sure...No why put the baby chairs there the old people could trip an die. Kass: Yea sure. Rialys: Ok cool, Monkey will pick ya up laters, cya babes. Kass: Bye.
Noland*
Pn: Mercury, would you get off that computer for a second? Mercury: NO! i nearly got a high score. Pn: Now, its Lunch time so come and eat. Mercury; Fine. (phone rings) PN answers: Hello? Rialys: Hey P, how are ya? Pn: Iam good, you? Rialys: Iam good, iam good, so you want to go out tonight? PN: Sure, i wll have to find a babysitter now tho. Rialys: Babysitter, i think mercurys old enough. Pn: You think so, but you know with Soccerryle buisness i wont take my chances. Rialys: Fine, Monkey will pick you up later.
Later*
Monkey drives away from Rialys and picks up Ray,Kass, Chriss, Pn, Max and another girl named Jenny.
Max: So monkey. wheres Rialys. Monkey: Shes ummm going through, her "Lady time" The hole car starts talking saying: "oh dam", "That nasty","Monkey why", ect.
Rialys*
ShadowyFigure: Your late. Rialys: Iam sorry Monkey didn't want to go. ShadowyFigure: How is monkey havent seen him for years. Rialys: hes good but htats not the point, now stick to te plan and the child it mine.
They walk to a house and stand at the backdoor*
Rialys: You ready? ShadowyFigure: I was born ready. Rialys: Remember were in and were out, got that? ShadowyFigure; Yes, yes lets go.
Rialys opens the door nd they both steep in and Rialys closes it very slowly so the neighbours dont see or hear* | |
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| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:34 am | |
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Rialys Rookie
Number of posts : 59 Age : 31 Location : UK Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2009-04-17
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Wed Aug 12, 2009 11:56 am | |
| I just saw Merc say 'NO! I nearly got a high score' and cracked up. So appropriate.
And dang, I really am a bad guy...and I call people 'babes'?! o.O | |
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null Trainer
Number of posts : 392 Friend Code : n/a Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:01 pm | |
| ROFLCOPTER
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Epic Chapter. | |
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Chris Admin
Number of posts : 705 Location : TRNC Friend Code : 1118 8172 5961 Registration date : 2008-04-11
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:55 pm | |
| Chrono, cool chapter! I wonder what will happen next... Can't wait to see the next chapter uploaded! Make sure its soon chrono! Rialys, yes, you are one of the bad guys! XD | |
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Chrono Admin
Number of posts : 1504 Age : 28 Location : Space Ribbons : Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2008-09-21
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:44 am | |
| sorry for the late epicness.
Spencer:
Rails: Ok you go upstairs, while i search for something down stairs. Shadowy Figure: Sure thing. Rails: Remember to keep quiet I don't want the next door to hear us. Shadowy Figure: Fine fine fine.
*Shadowy figure goes upstairs whle Rails looks for something.
Car*
Max: So Monkey where exactly are we going. Kass: Oh my god i dont like dark chocolate Pn, you freak. Monkey: Were going to watch a film and go to eat something. Pn: Sounds good, and kass give it a try. Ray: She doesn't have to try it if she doesn't want to. Pn: Shut it you, i want her to try it she never had it in her life. Max: Shes doing well. she maybe comming here soon. if she gets her visa that is. Kass: for work? so what Pn people say it makes them feel sick to have. Ray: you know what ill try a piece and tell you if i like it. Monkey: Wait what film are we going to watch..? Pn: Watch "tomorrow after yesterday" heard that really good. Kass: No..we should watch Jedi's newest film "Natzi zombie killer2". Ray: The first one was really good. Monkey: I think sequels ruin the move tho. Max: How about Megan fox's new film "Adapters 2" i head its better than the first. Monkey: Even so. Ray: O MY GOD MEGAN FOX IS FIT AS..... *Kass hits ray on the head* Ray: Fit as a female dog. *Kass knods her head* *monkey parks the car they all get out and get tickets*
*spencer*
Rialys: so you ready? Shadowy figure: Hell yea.
*the following clip was removed for younger viewers*
Rialys: I hope this worked, and oh my you were good. Shadowy figure: Thanks i know iam talented. Rialys: gees no wounder Pn loved you..
thats it so far...stay tuned for next season on DESPERATE RAY WIVES | |
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Rialys Rookie
Number of posts : 59 Age : 31 Location : UK Friend Code : 0000 0000 0000 Registration date : 2009-04-17
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:18 pm | |
| ....Waitwaitwait...Desperate Ray Wives lives again?!
Oh dear...I now have a bad feeling as to what I was up to with the shadowy figure... | |
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null Trainer
Number of posts : 392 Friend Code : n/a Registration date : 2008-06-16
| Subject: Re: Desperat Ray Wives Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:21 pm | |
| RIALYS! Thanks for that item y'kno ;D Anyways, woohoo, DRW Ftw, | |
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